Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Teaser Tuesday

"A hunting party formed of possibly the only ones in Wishing Falls foolish enough to risk the forest home of those who had been living around and preying on the town since its inception. While sounding like an ancient ominous balance, it wasn’t one. Not really. Wishing Falls was a young town, one still at risk of vanishing in the night."

2 comments:

Lesliejm said...

Totally awesome! Love the phrase "vanishing in the night." I had to read the first sentence a couple of times though - baby brain slowing me down?

Chandra Rooney said...

No, it's not baby brain... something isn't right with the syntax. Still working on it. Thanks!